It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A voice came out with the argument that it is more significant to learn

art

and

literature

rather than

math

and

science

. From my point of view,

art

and

literature

is

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essential for people to learn

the

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history and

life

which could be helpful for their

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psychological

psycological

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psychological

questions,

however

, I still consent with the idea that

math

and

science

comes

first

compared with

art

and

literature

.

First

,

math

and

science

are the fundamental subjects for all

students

whose scores are included for future higher education, no matter

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will be a

science

student or

study

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literature

.

Math

is the subject that

students

need to learn from elementary school until college, and it will not be changed in a short time. Education background plays a key role in your future

life

. If

students

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too much

on

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art

and

literature

instead

of

math

and

science

, they will be highly left behind by others and miss the opportunity to take

a

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higher education.

Second

, learning

math

and

science

is helpful to form a logical thinking mindset which is essential for many practical skills in

life

.

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has discovered that learning

math

and

science

is the way to train

our

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left hemisphere of our brain, which is related to our logic.

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, communication

skill

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and critical thinking,

they

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are both

the

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basic skills that you can not miss

them

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to integrate

in

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the sophisticated society nowadays. With so much news and information online, you have to hold a clear mind and be critical

to

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the information you absorb

ethier

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either

from books or people. With

a

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logical thinking, it is easy for people to be treated and stuck in some

philanogical

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philological

questions

so

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that

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may arouse psychological problems. Another example like computer

skill

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skills

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,

the

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society

now

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turns

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to

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a digital world,

almost

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and almost

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all

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professionals today acquire solidate computer

skill

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skills

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in the workplace.

Math

and

science

are definitely essential to it. Learning

math

and

science

is a must for future

life

and

professionals

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of

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students

. Overall, even though

art

and

literature

are important for

students

to learn more about

life

through others,

math

and

science

should come

first

in their study period.