Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspapers have bad consequences. This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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is knowledge , crimes and other atrocities that should

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on

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television and

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shouldn't be hidden from

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is really a great help in other to

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more lives and properties.

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,

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,in Nigeria, due to the insecurity problems, with the

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shared by the

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and news broadcaster over the television and social media

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people

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will be mindful of their movement especially

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people

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that travel by road.

consenqently

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, a lot of

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have

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kidnapped, murdered , rapped and abused physically, mentally and emotionally.

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, without the spread of

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informations

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a lot more would be happening and

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could make

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to

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lose their trust

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the

government

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.

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, circulating an idea

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people

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in the

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clue and

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a warning that everyone should be

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cautions

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of their movement and environment . Most of these criminals

comes

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in disguise in other to deceive

people

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and

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their wicked plan.

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around the axis of Douglas road

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a

begger

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was asking for help from a woman and the lady in question decided to assist her with some cash only for

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to disappear after giving the

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money

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created lots of confusion and a message was passed as well in other for

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to be careful.

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, the idea of sharing criminal and other vital

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will help to alert one's self and

moreso

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more

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community

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can engage in forming a vigilante group that will help the

government

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and enforcement agencies in getting the culprits involved in

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criminal

act

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crimes gives the

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a sense of

humor

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that

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has their interest at heart. It

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creates awareness on the kind of routes not to be taken at a particular hour or day to avoid being

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ambushed

or being a victim

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people

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can

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assist by suggesting to

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and security agencies opinions that could be vital. Notwithstanding, that the spread could affect individuals psychologically and mentally , families will be scared of allowing their loved ones to travel to distant places ,

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individual's

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health might

be affect

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due to the

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shared

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as high blood pressure and fear of the unknown.

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will choose to migrate to better and safe cities

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population will reduce drastically and

economy

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will be affected. In conclusion,

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of

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is

of

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a good way of creating awareness and alerting the

community

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members on how to protect their lives and properties, but

restriction

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of crime and other

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will endanger the lives of

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thereby making the

people

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not

to

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trust the

government

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and security agencies.