Some people prefer to work a lot, and spend less time on leisure activities. I think that this has more drawbacks than benefits

Some

people

prefer to

work

a

lot

and spend less time on leisure activities. I think that

this

has more drawbacks than benefits. Working long hours will lead to some detrimental impacts on

people

. In fact, these days most

people

have a hectic lifestyle and tough schedule. They usually do not have enough spare time to do their favourite activities. After a while, they may be hurt mentally.

For instance

, some employees do a

lot

of overtime to cover their bills, and some of them are under heavy

work

pressure. In

this

case, many of them become exhausted and even depressed.

Thus

, their productivity may be reduced, and it is more likely to make some mistakes in their

work

.

On the other hand

, working a

lot

has some benefits

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

people

. There are some ambitious

people

who effort to gain job promotion. Some of them do not go on vacation in order to

work

on their tasks and projects.

In addition

, some others tend to

work

overtime to earn more money, especially ones who have low-paid jobs. Job promotion and making more money are some adults' goals, and these achievements make them satisfied in their life. Because of

this

, they do not attention to the negative consequences of working a

lot

. To sum up, working a

lot

without having leisure activities has some advantages and disadvantages. In my view, health is the most important thing in life, and anything is not worth putting health in danger.