IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 2

Many people think that everyone has a right to a university education and governments should make it free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #right #university #education #governments #students
Personally, I’m sure that everyone has a right to
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
university education but governments cannot make it free for all students, especially, in under-developing nations
such
 as Viet Nam.
Firstly
, freeing
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
all of them could make governments lack finance. I believe that it’s very difficult for the administration to give salaries to all teachers without getting fees from students while the source of economics is at an average level
such
 as Viet Nam.
Secondly
, almost those who join university will get a subjective feeling when they don’t have to pay the fee. They do not think of the time paying fee so much and they aren’t almost aware of
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
 pressure feeling. In brief, I really don’t have the same opinion that government should do that for all students.
Submitted by thanh683979 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: