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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree?

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In
current
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scenario
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, it is common for
people
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one
 career at the same time to work frequently.
People
 of all ages are enrolled
various
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 online courses to acquire new skills and
qualification
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. In my
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 developing ourselves is
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a new
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 and
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exciting
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exiting
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exciting
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 chance to encourage
this
 trend. The following essay will discuss my views
further
.
people
 want to
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achieve
achive
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achieve
 more and more as they are not satisfied with what they have. For most
people
 working more than
one
job
 is the only way to
achive
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achieve
thier
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their
this
 ambitions in life. as lecturers spend
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their
thier
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their
 free time in tutions, doctors give classes to
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practitioners
practioners
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practitioners
 and IT
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management
managment
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management
professional
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professionals
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 dedicating
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their
thier
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their
 weekends
for
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 building
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their
thier
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their
 own startups.
Moreover
, everybody is exploring all possible ways of finding an extra income to reach
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their
thier
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their
 goals because nowadays basic needs are
also
 getting expensive it could be
one
 of the
reason
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 as well.
Soaring
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 competition
also
 encourages many adults to seek more than
one
 occupation.
Job
 security is no longer
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available
availabe
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available
 in many sectors
thus
people
 may
loose
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their
thier
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their
job
 anytime and to protect themselves against
such
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phenomenon
phonomenon
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phenomenon
 they are working two or more jobs.
For example
 in recent times pandemic has left many
people
 jobless as companies couldn't manage
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their
the
thier
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their
 financial stability. The
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availability
availablity
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availability
 of more opportunities
also
 motivates many
people
 to adopt multiple
profession
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professions
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. on the other
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hand
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hands
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 internet is becoming
great
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a great
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 facility for
few
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a few
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sectors
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 individuals to work from anywhere.
This
 enables them
work
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to work
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 frequently without quitting
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their
thier
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their
full time
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full-time
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job
. In conclusion, ambition and the lack of occupation security are the factors that
people
 to pursue multiple careers.
Availablity
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 of more and new opportunities made
easier
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it easier
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 for them.
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