Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it. In your letter: State why the building is important What the building can be used for in the future Suggest ways for paying for the repairs
Dear Sir, I am
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writing
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to bring your
attention Change preposition
to your
of
the demolish Change preposition
to
historical
building in my place which is located Add an article
the historical
a historical
at
Kent Street. As it is old and getting Change preposition
on
damage
it requires to renovate as soon as possible.
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damaged
addtion
, our area is Correct your spelling
addition
popoular
and named after that building because it is a Correct your spelling
popular
beautiful
constructed complex in 1960 by Change the adjective
beautifully
NIzam
ruler, Correct your spelling
Nizam
Moreover
, the design of walls, doors, windows are handmande
. and rocks used to construct are not available now which show material quality and Correct your spelling
handmade
archticture
of those days. It was Correct your spelling
architecture
also
popular
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a popular
for
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apply
tourist
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a tourist
spot
. Fix the agreement mistake
spots
However
, today the building is abonded
due to its age and Correct your spelling
abandoned
need
to be repaired.
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needs
Moreover
, this
can be used as
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for
museum
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a museum
purpose
which would be precious for Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
next
generations Correct article usage
the next
also
to keep in touch with historical facts and the beauty of this
building will attract more foreigners on the other hands
it can be used as Fix the agreement mistake
hand
library
. Add an article
a library
Furthermore
, I want to recommend you to utilize the government funds for this
social deed, otherwise
citizens of my area agree to contribute some funds to renovate of symbolic Add a comma
,otherwise
mommentum
of heritage.
Waiting for your prompt service.
Yours faithfully,
Karan Mummaneni.Correct your spelling
momentum
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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