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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

#internet #information
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internet
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one
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innovation
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today's
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 world. It has
potential
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 to make lives
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convenient
conveninent
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convenient
 and easy.
Although
 it
also
 creates
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problems
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 will discuss the
internet
 causing
problems
 and solutions.
Firstly
,
one
 of the main
problem
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problems
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caused
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caused
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internet
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the internet
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 is
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the lack
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 of security and personal information as
world
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the world
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 is moving towards
digital
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the digital
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 age. Online banking and other social media frauds are increasing. Most of the
times
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 has been spent by people on
internet
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the internet
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 which leads to
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addiction
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 mainly children and youngsters, it
also
 creates
wall
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between
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between
real
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the real
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 to
virtual
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the virtual
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 world in some situations mental and health
issues
 are created by
internet
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the internet
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. People spend
lot
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 of money on
internet
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the internet
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 even
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if its
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its
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it's
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 not necessary.
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their
there
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there
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this
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problems
one
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to
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 cybercrime if they faced any
issues
,
government
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the government
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 should
trackdown
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track down
 the cyber criminals who
operates
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 fraud things online. Banking
transations
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transactions
 sites should be
dezined
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designed
defined
 in
such
 a way that no
one
 can decode
it
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. Parents and schools should be educated to be aware of false information available
in
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 websites. As most users are children and youngsters. So that they can rectify from mental and physical health
issues
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also
 they should
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 to outdoor
activties
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activities
. To conclude the main
problems
 of
internet
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the internet
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is
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 related to crime and addiction, to solve these parents and teachers should educate
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issues
 caused by
internet
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.
Awerness
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Awareness
 should be thought
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government
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the government
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 side as well.
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