You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.

Dear Julien, Hope you are doing well, I am
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writing
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writing
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letter to inform you that I want to pursue post-graduation
in
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Fleeming University, which will be more useful to my career
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although
altough
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although
admission has been not confirmed by
college
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but I suppose to join in
August
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intake.
Firstly
, As you know I have completed
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course in Hotel
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Management
and I am
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interested
intersted
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interested
in cooking, so I want to do
further
courses in cookery which will be more helpful to develop my skills.
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University is providing six
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paid internship as well where I can learn practically in
five star
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hotels.
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Further
Furthere
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Furthermore
more
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they
also
provide placements in
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companies which will be easy for me to get
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.
Secondly
, I am looking for a room nearby
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institute
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so that I can save some travelling
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because campus rooms are very expensive.
Single
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room will be great with basic
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amenities
like wifi and
study
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table.
Finally
, I know
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applications
applicatons
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applications
like Trade me,
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Bnb where you can find single cottages, These online apps are more helpful for students and
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public notice boards. I hope soon
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from you. Regards, Karan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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