You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.
Dear Julien,
Hope you are doing well, I am
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writing
writting
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writing
this
letter to inform you that I want to pursue post-graduation in
Fleeming University, which will be more useful to my career Change preposition
at
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although
altough
admission has been not confirmed by Correct your spelling
although
college
but I suppose to join in Add an article
the college
August
intake.
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the August
Firstly
, As you know I have completed Diploma
course in Hotel Add an article
a Diploma
Managment
and I am Correct your spelling
Management
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interested
intersted
in cooking, so I want to do Correct your spelling
interested
further
courses in cookery which will be more helpful to develop my skills. Moreover
University is providing six Add a comma
,Moreover
month
paid internship as well where I can learn practically in Change to a plural noun
months
five star
hotels. Add a hyphen
five-star
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Further
Furthere
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Furthermore
more
they Correct quantifier usage
apply
also
provide placements in top paid
companies which will be easy for me to get Add a hyphen
top-paid
job
.
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a job
the job
Secondly
, I am looking for a room nearby Correct your spelling
institute
institue
so that I can save some travelling Correct article usage
the institue
cost
because campus rooms are very expensive. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Single
room will be great with basic Add an article
A single
amneties
like wifi and Correct your spelling
amenities
study
table.
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a study
Finally
, I know few
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a few
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applications
applicatons
like Trade me, Correct your spelling
applications
Air
Bnb where you can find single cottages, These online apps are more helpful for students and Correct word choice
and Air
also
you can check in
public notice boards.
I hope soon Change preposition
on
reply
from you.
Regards,
KaranCorrect article usage
a reply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite