Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was
It is hard to deny that most home
waste
has not been recycled exactly, and Use synonyms
such
a fact leads impressionable Linking Words
people
to generate the opinion that we can improve the situation only by Use synonyms
governments'
legal Change noun form
governments
requirement
. Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
However
, Linking Words
such
a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as feasibility and efficiency are concerned, I strongly hold that issuing a law is not Linking Words
an
only measure to solve the recycling problems.
Correct article usage
the
First
and foremost, forcing residents to do recycling in every detail for fulfilling the government's requests may result in dissatisfaction among Linking Words
public
since they are reluctant to do Add an article
the public
such
things. Given that more and more Linking Words
people
are living a busy life which means they may not have the time to reach every point of the law, they are likely to regard environmental protection as an unnecessary measure and a Use synonyms
waste
of time. Use synonyms
As a result
, some radical Linking Words
people
may dump garbage deliberately and secretly as a way to express their anger. Use synonyms
Therefore
, compulsory measures can be a Linking Words
less-than desirable
solution for Add a hyphen
less-than-desirable
waste
recycling as Use synonyms
it
can not reach an outcome of feasibility.
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they
Nevertheless
, a voice arises that forcing a connected law is the only way for increasing Linking Words
waste
recycling. Ironically, it is obvious that there Use synonyms
is
actually more solutions which can be easily accepted by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
public
.
Add an article
the public
Therefore
, we need to try a better and more accepting method by arising Linking Words
people
's Use synonyms
environment
awareness. Replace the word
environmental
For instance
, they can widely spread advertisements about the dangerous currency situation of the environment and how it will affect Linking Words
on
Change preposition
apply
people
's future survival to encourage Use synonyms
public
Correct article usage
the public
reduce
the volume of rubbish. If we do not solve the essential problem by changing Fix the infinitive
to reduce
people
's Use synonyms
mind
, we would never have an efficient way Fix the agreement mistake
minds
for
environment Change preposition
of
protecting
.
In a nutshell, I maintain that we can arise Replace the word
protection
people
's awareness of Use synonyms
waste
cycling rather than by compulsory measures of governments which can be more feasible and efficient.Use synonyms
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