YOu are going to another country to study. u wud like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. in your letter: 1. give details of your study plans. 2. explain why you want to get a part-time job. 3. suggest how your friend could help you find a job:

Dear Max, Hello, how are you? I hope you're doing okay and still in good health. Anyway, I'
m
writing to inform you that I'
m
going to Australia
next
month to take a Master's Degree, it's a three-year course with a scholarship program. During my stay there, I'
m
planning to apply for a part-time job to sustain my education, my monthly bills and my daily needs. Even though my parents said that they will send money every month, I can't just let them burden themselves for me.
Therefore
, I'
m
asking for your help regarding the matter. It's my
first
time going to Australia and I don't know where to look for a job eligible for international students. Can you accompany me to look for a part-time job once I've arrived there? You can give me a tour while we're looking, in that way, I'll get familiar with the place and not get lost. I'll
also
treat you with meals while you help me, that would be my payment for your help. I'
m
expecting a positive response to my request. Warm wishes, Angelica
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