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Counties are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#counties #people #products #world #development
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this
industralization
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industrialization
industrialisation
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technology
as
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has
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 a significant influence on
people
 daily life starting from daily
routine
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routines
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 to important things. The same as shopping, as we can buy anything
at
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anywhere conveniently and the product can be shipped to us in a short period.
However
, I am
convienced
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convinced
 that there are both benefits and drawbacks on
this
 as the
products
 we are using are getting more and more similar.
Firstly
, because of the
technology
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 development, we are able to use
the
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good quality
products
 from foreign countries, which upgrade our living standards.
For example
, we can see most of the Thai and Chinese
products
such
 as food and beverage and
the
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clothing widely used in Myanmar as the quality are good and the price is reasonable. Yet, there are some similar
products
 that are manufactured in Myanmar,
however
, we are getting used to the
import
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 product we
thinks
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 that the quality of the
products
 are not the same even though the brand
are
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 the same.
This
 has changed the mindset of the
people
 not to promote the local
products
instead
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 depending so much on the import and foreign brand new
products
. Meanwhile, have we not obviously seen enough that globalization has caused some minority
tradition
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traditions
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disappear
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 and the young
people
 are not keen to preserve their own
tradition
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traditions
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.
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,
traditional
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the traditional
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costume
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costumes
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 of
an
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ethnicity can rarely be seen as
people
 just wear
the
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modern clothes and never wear their own attire even on a special
occasion
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. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that being able to
accessible
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 to
the
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global
products
 has made our lives getting better,
however
, should we just
forgotten
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forget
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 our background and not
promoting
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promote
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 our local
products
?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Uniformity
  • Cultural exchange
  • Accessibility
  • Economic implications
  • Local economies
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental considerations
  • Consumer choice
  • Quality of life
  • Overconsumption
  • Artisanal goods
  • Global community
  • Trade and commerce
  • Eroding local businesses
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