Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Numerous people say that globalisation and the development of multinational firms have negative consequences on nature. In my experience, I partially disagree with the above statement because of numerous reasons.

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of all, there are two major drawbacks to the planet. One major drawback is the increasing use of natural resources worldwide. Because our infrastructure and possession have increased significantly, our needs

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have increased fast, huge natural resources have been exploited.

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, from 2010 to 2020, billion tons of fossil fuel were consumed worldwide.

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, during the exploitation and manufacturing process, huge waste material was released into the planet, which

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leads to environmental damage.

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, In 2010 the government punished a multinational company, named A, which dumped a

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of waste-produced materials into a river.

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, globalisation gains numerous advanced results

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the environment. One of these advantages is that some multinational companies, which have wonderful technology, have shared their technology around the world. My friend, named Hoang, works for an international agricultural company which have experience in planting crops without pesticides. The company built many apartments in my country

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and has shared the experience with a

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of farmers.

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, multinational firms working in educational fields have helped developing and undeveloped countries to improve their educational system, and

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improve residents' knowledge about the environment,

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as VUS firm has helped my country to educate a

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of students. In conclusion,

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globalisation leads to many cons for nature, it

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results in a

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of appealed pros.

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, I partially disagree with the above statement.