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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In recent years, the number of
people
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 who travel or emigrate to other countries has increased.
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, there has been a debate that whether those
people
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 will encounter some problems if they do not familiar with the
language
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 of the
country
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.
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 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
this
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 issue and give my opinions at the end of the essay. On the one hand,
people
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 who like to live in a foreign
country
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 might think that languages are not a big problem for them to communicate with others.
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, if they don’t know about the
language
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 of the
country
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 they live in, they can use body
language
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 and English to deal with it, because English is the international
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, and almost every
country
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 would understand it.
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, they think as long as they stay in a foreign
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 for a period of time, they will learn how to say its
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 naturally.
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,
people
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 who are not accustomed to living in other countries might think it is difficult to interact with foreigners because English is not a common
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 in some countries.
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, if you want to buy something in the supermarket or ask for directions from others, you will have some trouble.
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, some foreigners might discriminate against
people
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 who are not native speakers.
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, if you are a foreign student, you may be ostracized by your classmates. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, if you want to study abroad or have a long-term trip to a foreign
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, it is better for you to learn the
language
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 of the
country
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 you want to go to in advance. In
this
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 way, it can help you to deal with any unexpected problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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