Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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has become a very important aspect of
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life
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. I feel learning a foreign
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in the early days will help a
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in many ways.
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create a feeling of affinity in a person. It is a way of expressing your thoughts to someone. The more speech you speak the more diversified you are, you can talk to different types of people if you can speak a wide range of
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. English is one of the primary foreign
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that a
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should learn. As it is the most spoken & understandable
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in our globe. After their mother tongue &
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english
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I feel a
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can learn many other
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like Spanish, French, Arabic, Chinese & many more the list goes on. Discussing
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our point about when is the right time for a
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to learn a foreign
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, I feel it depends upon how good the grasping power of the
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is. As in ,schools there are many other activities which need to be done by the junior & there is a vast
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syllabus. So learning in primary school is not the ideal decision I feel. But some studies show that before 14
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of age a
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ability to learn is much better
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, they feel if
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are introduced to foreign
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in the early stages of their
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it will be much easier for them to grasp it. But there is a whole group of people including me, who think
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should be introduced to foreign
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in their secondary schools as the
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have a much more thought process between 14-18
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of their
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is the ideal moment for a parent to introduce them to foreign
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. By those
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they will have already learned their mother tongue & English. So there won't be
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pressure of learning 3
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at a time, they can focus on their selected foreign
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. At
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a
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builds some signs of maturity
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, it will be easier for them to manage time for their whole day as they will be having other activities & studies
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. Another benefit of introducing pupils to a foreign
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in the secondary
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of their schooling
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is they will be introduced to socializing & they can socialize with
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of similar interests. Specifically, a junior who has selected the same foreign
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talking to a friend with the
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you are learning helps to understand it easily. Having a conversation with someone of your age is the most interesting & happening practice a
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can do to be much more precise in that particular speech or topic. As we summarize
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to
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is much ideal in the secondary schooling
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • globalized world
  • language acquisition
  • pronunciation
  • critical thinking
  • culturally aware
  • language interference
  • motivated approach
  • curriculum demands
  • natural learning abilities
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