Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Language
has become a very important aspect of people
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people's
life
. I feel learning a foreign language
in the early days will help a pupil
in many ways. Languages
create a feeling of affinity in a person. It is a way of expressing your thoughts to someone.
The more speech you speak the more diversified you are, you can talk to different types of people if you can speak a wide range of languages
. English is one of the primary foreign languages
that a child
should learn. As it is the most spoken & understandable language
in our globe. After their mother tongue & Change the capitalization
English
english
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,english
child
can learn many other languages
like Spanish, French, Arabic, Chinese & many more the list goes on.
Discussing to
our point about when is the right time for a Change preposition
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child
to learn a foreign language
, I feel it depends upon how good the grasping power of the pupil
is. As in ,schools there are many other activities which need to be done by the junior & there is a vast academics
syllabus. So learning in primary school is not the ideal decision I feel. But some studies show that before 14 Change the noun form
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years
of age a children
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child's
therefore
, they feel if students
are introduced to foreign languages
in the early stages of their life's
it will be much easier for them to grasp it.
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pupils
languages
in their secondary schools as the students
have a much more thought process between 14-18 years
of their life
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is the ideal moment for a parent to introduce them to foreign languages
. By those ages
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pressure of learning 3 Correct article usage
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languages
at a time, they can focus on their selected foreign Correct your spelling
language
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. At Correct your spelling
language
those age
a Change the determiner
that age
those ages
child
builds some signs of maturity therefore
, it will be easier for them to manage time for their whole day as they will be having other activities & studies also
. Another benefit of introducing pupils to a foreign language
in the secondary years
of their schooling life
is they will be introduced to socializing & they can socialize with students
of similar interests. Specifically, a junior who has selected the same foreign language
, although
talking to a friend with the language
you are learning helps to understand it easily. Having a conversation with someone of your age is the most interesting & happening practice a pupil
can do to be much more precise in that particular speech or topic.
As we summarize this
essay, it feels introducing
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students
to a foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
languages
is much ideal in the secondary schooling years
of a student
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