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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It seems to define a
person
's worth by judging
people
 according to their social
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status
statys
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status
 and material
possessions
 nowadays.
People
 tend to ignore the old-fashioned values,
such
 as
honour
, kindness and
trust
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these days.
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 my observation
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marriage
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 issue, I sadly agree with
this
 opinion.
People
 are likely to pursue
the
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power in society and
the
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material
possessions
 because
this
 kind of stuff is able to be valued.
People
 can compare with each other and feel self-
fullfillment
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fulfilment
 by looking down
others
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 who do not have
same
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possessions
posessions
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possessions
. In order to make others jealous,
people
 tend to date
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the
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person
 who has higher social status or famous credit. By showing off the higher position they obtained,
people
 complete their vanity and
beome
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become
 not really care about the personality of their mate. In gradual, it seems no longer important to have
honour
,
kindeness
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kindness
 and
trust
.
However
, the old-fashioned values are still vital
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characteristic
charateristic
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characteristics
as
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 a
person
 in my opinion.
People
 with
honour
,
kindeness
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kindness
 and
trust
, are likely to make a success in any field. Cause the guy is kind, likes to
trust
people
, and
also
 attempts to win
the
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honour
, he may get more
chance
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chances
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 to win more social status and material
possessions
 by himself. Not by getting married
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 others, but
striving
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the
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 position on his/her own. It's
more
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 permanent and
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practical
pratical
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practical
 way to reach higher social status. In conclusion, it is important to keep old-fashioned values,
such
 as
honour
, kindness and
trust
 in mind. To judge the worth of a
person
, not only
concern
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 about how
much
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 material
possessions
 or social power he has, but try to admire the personality he has.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social status
  • material possessions
  • old-fashioned values
  • honour
  • kindness
  • trust
  • empathy
  • media influence
  • self-worth
  • metrics of success
  • financial achievements
  • community contributions
  • superficial connections
  • emotional bonds
  • life satisfaction
  • stress and anxiety
  • policy changes
  • community programs
  • restoring balance
  • personal character
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