In many parts of world there is continuos coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

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Currently,there are many people who believe that television,which has not been showing

sports

shows for a long time or continually concealing it from youngsters,can make them feel less interested in

sports

. I,

however

,partially disagree with

this

idea.My reasons will be written in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

To begin

with,one of the main factors of

this

situation is related to the tightened life schedules.To illustrate,students spend most time clearing their work assignments including projects,which requires a lot of energy from learners.

As a result

,it is nearly impossible to do outdoor activities

such

as playing football due to either lack of time or running out of energy.Since teenagers do not or rarely have opportunities to perform

such

activities,they gradually pay less attention to them later. Admittedly,adolescents,who are fond of recreation,mostly regard celebrities specializing in physical pursuits as their role models.It can be seen that many

sports

fan clubs generally collect things in which their favourite idols are featured.

For instance

,milestone supporters have a passion for gathering clothes,phone cases or other accessories to which well-known football players are added.Back to

this

topic,audiences majorly prefer watching recreation programmes through TV,view the fact that it has a bigger screen and it is more enjoyable to visit these shows with peers than doing it alone.

Consequently

,if entertainment programmes are prohibited on TV,it contributes to youngsters,who are the majority,running out of motivation for

sports

as well. To conclude,

although

there are many options to get access to

sports

apart from television,it is undisputed that visiting game shows via television significantly influence adolescents.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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255 words

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