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Now people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose with improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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disadvantages
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 for
people
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choose
show examples
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environment
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Geographical constraints
  • Global understanding
  • Socio-economic disparities
  • Carbon footprint
  • Work-life balance
  • Brain drain
  • Economic disparity
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Environmental costs
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