Some people believe that you should strictly control your children’s behaviour, while some others believe children should be free to choose their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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, nowadays, are spending a lot of money to teach their offspring great etiquette and manners.

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some people believe that adolescents'

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must be monitored on a daily basis, others argue that

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can pose some challenges to their mental health in general. In

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I support the latter opinion. On the

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hand, a lot of people, who argue that

children

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's code of conduct should be controlled by their

parents

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or guardians, might say that

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enables teenagers to develop a strong conscience, being able to tell what is right and wrong. The reason for

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is that

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must monitor their offspring's

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since

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will teach them manners and etiquette.

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, school-going teenagers in my country, India, are usually rewarded for their attitude and code of conduct.

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, if these students are not monitored on a regular basis,

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they might become a bad influence on the adolescents surrounding them.

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, I would argue that their behaviours should not be monitored. It is because of

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that

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will enable them to develop their own opinions and thoughts without any pressure from guardians or

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. To illustrate

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point, a child can learn in abundance in school provided that there is no pressure on him on how to behave each and every second of the day.

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, if school-going

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are measured every single day for their

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, many of them might become timid and emotionally weak in fear of fulfilling the criteria proposed by their well-wishers. In conclusion,

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rewarding

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for their apt

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can compel them to

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, some might become emotionally inept because of continuous monitoring. I think that students should be allowed to choose their

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freely.