Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.

There is a debate about whether the places like museums and art galleries which provide entertainment for people should be given free entrance or not. In my opinion, it should charge a reasonable
fee
for admission and
this
essay will discuss the justifications for my view.
Firstly
, maintaining a venue is not an easy task and it has many maintenance costs
such
as electricity, water, and cleaning. All these
items
get billed by the relevant authorities and need to be settled on a time for uninterrupted service.
Hence
, there must be a way to earn money to pay bills and so collecting a reasonable amount for admission would help to maintain the
place
nice and clean.
Secondly
, to run the
place
it is required to keep dedicated staff as well.
Therefore
, staff salaries
also
need to be settled and substantial income is required for
this
.
Finally
, some
items
displayed in these museums and art galleries are required to be paid a royalty
fee
.
Hence
, a regular income is critical to smoothly
manage
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managing
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a high valued aesthetic entertainment
place
. Paying a very nominal
fee
like $5 per person to entrance won't be an issue for a visitor who would like to enjoy fine arts or historically valued
items
. It gives an extra value to the
items
inside when the entry is valued and only the people who have real enthusiasm will enter the premises. To conclude, in my view it is always best to charge a small
fee
for the entry and use that collection to maintain the
place
instead
of using taxpayer money to maintain a public entertainment
place
. It is fair for the taxpayer as well as the museum visitor.
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