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You can get up-to-date news from the radio, TV and the Internet. Which kind of media do you think is the best to get the news?

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these days technology become better day after day, and there are so many sources that you can hear what is going on in our world. But the more sources it comes there are types of people who would prefer one specific source, so the question is what is the best way to hear the
news
? in our days there are so many people will choose the
Internet
, while others will prefer tv or even
radio
, if it comes to me it will be definitely from the
Internet
 because it seems to be the optimum choice compared with the others on servary reasons below.
firstly
, the
internet
 has a lot of ways you can see
news
,
also
 you can get it easily at where ever you are, to illustrate, I can watch the
news
 on the website while I am in the coffee shop, and another way on the
Internet
 is social media,
for
example
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 there are so many accounts on them you can watch the
news
,
although
 it is all free you only need wi-fi to have access.
secondly
, it contains a video which is the opposite of the
radio
, I can hear and see the
news
 clearly.
However
, I could prefer the
radio
 when I am in my car and listen while on my way to university or even work. Others will prefer the
radio
, but it has negatives more than positives,
for example
,it has limited places you can hear the
news
, for an instance, at home which is what I will not do it. In conclusion, I believe getting
news
 has unlimited ways,
also
 I would like the
internet
 more because for many reasons and I said some of them.
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