You can get up-to-date news from the radio, TV and the Internet. Which kind of media do you think is the best to get the news?

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modern era , technology involves
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all sectors
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as newspapers , radio ,
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and the internet so many
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get global
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essay I would explain which source is best for the community.
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in the past so all individuals emphasised
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radio, they were to listening all stuff and inform others.
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, nowadays , there are several platforms for getting global
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as
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, radio , newspaper and applying e-
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the new generation depends a lot on the internet connection because they can not only to
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the
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on their mobile phones but
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they can see live what happens
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in the world.
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, many application arrives so they provide all
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to living with the world. On the other many older
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prefer only
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news
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or reading newspaper for current affairs because they are habitat with that and they like reading
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apply physically because they can
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know the writer's opinion on
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topic.
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, many professionals,
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as businessmen and politicians
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like to watch the
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on
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or on mobile because they like to see visuals
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as compared to only reading
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they can attach to many other things
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city or country. In conclusion. It depends on to person's choice because if they like to read
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in newspapers so they can go with that,
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, if
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like to have
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on application threw or
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so it is
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good but in my opinion new must be relevant to the fact and it should provide only real
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on whatever media platform because many
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share these things with their family so it is important to having truth rather than wrong.
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