It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays we are hearing a lot about taking
risks
, In all sorts of programs, which is, of course, the main reason of
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for
this
essay and I will explain the positive and negative points of this
important topic.
If I want to share my idea with the readers, putting yourselves in danger and try
to change the situation that you are stuck in, by far is one of the best things that you could ever do. Because you will understand the strongest part of yourself and learn new and extremely cool things in your work or personal life. On the other ,hand taking Wrong verb form
trying
risks
makes your brain concentrate more on the job and discussions in it. Although
it has its own disadvantages such
as anxiety and depression, which are always a part of that, it seems that taking risks
by individuals is increasing day by day. ,Also
I have to be honest and discuss the drawbacks with you though, for example
, if you are a businessman or woman and you have to take risks
, you might bankrupt and lose everything you have in your career. But at least we have a massive example of those people who lost their profession, and money in order to challenge themselves.
In conclusion, I must add that in my opinion nation must have courage and take risks
and put themselves in an adventurous life, which is more enjoyable than just sitting and have no achievements, goals or plans for their life and just live their destiny.Submitted by negin.afshar1997 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite