Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said by some individuals that the major environmental issue we currently face is the loss of specific plant species and mammals, while others think that there are other essential

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in our surroundings.

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both are factual,

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I am of the opinion that other crucial

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as increased global pollution and global warming pose more dangerous

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to the human habitat.

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with, when there is the extinction of plants and

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causes

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as there will be limited means of revenue and knowledge. These

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are caused by human activities

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as frequent deforestation and hunting, thereby, leading to the unavailability of limited types of plants and

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.

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as dinosaurs, which are no more in existence would have been useful for both research and tourism if they were still available.

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, there are major

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which are causing a greater negative impact on the

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's environment, these include, global warming and environmental contamination. As carbon dioxide traps heat from the sun, it causes an increase in global temperature. When

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happens, there will be melting of the polar ice caps, which in turn leads to sea level rise and more extreme weather conditions.

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, due to the surge in the

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's population and advances in technology, there is an increase in waste production, smoke and fumes, which are related to industrial activities and the high use of machinery

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as vehicles. All of these lead to serious environmental pollution,

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, posing a great risk to human health. To conclude, even though the non-existence of particular flowers, trees and

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are

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to the

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's habitat. I believe that contamination of the natural environment with harmful substances and heating of the atmospheric temperature is more intense

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to the

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's surroundings.