The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
believe that advertisement should be prohibited entirely, because of the ruinous impact. In my opinion, though it might be a way to reduce the destructive influence of advertising , at the same time, we should not neglect the positive benefits from it.
Prevention supporters argue that advertisements
have no benefits to society but are misleading to consumers. Advertisers usually exaggerate the functions or features to promote the products or services, which may also
result in unfair competition in the market. Advertisements
that are not child friendly may also
impact young people
's mental health. For example
, watching advertisements
for adult products may lead to precocity.
Nonetheless
, there are advertisements
are of value
to society . Nowadays, advertisers tend to implant social value
into the content instead
of simply telling the features of a product. For instance
, NIKE uses a story of a champion to deliver the brand value
: Just do it , which inspires many people
to pursue their dreams regardless of others' criticism and obstacles, which is quite helpful to form
a positive social Wrong verb form
forming
value
. Beyond this
, banning all advertisements
may disrupt the economy since it has become a significant global business. For example
, the profits of giants like Facebook and Google are mainly from online advertisements
. Without the advertising business, not only the big name enterprises, all companies who supply products or services to them would suffer, and many people
would lose their jobs. What is more, if corporations cannot advertise, they may lose their motivation to innovate since their value
cannot spread widely, resulting in a slower development in a range of major fields of human life.
In conclusion, despite the negative impact that advertising may bring to human society, human life can still benefit from certain kinds of advertisements
. Prohibition on all advertisements
will influence a series of fields connected with this
industry, which can arouse a disturbance in the economy and social stability. Setting stricter standards and rules to diminish the wrong sides and enhance the good sides by regulating the market could be a better solution.Submitted by mengjia.ma on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite