Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many

people

believe that every child should be educated until they finish senior high school degrees.

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some

people

is to concur with

such

claims.

Nonetheless

, from my point of view, there are several persuasive reasons to refute

this

statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of perspectives to examine

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issue more

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. The main reason to support my position is that if young

people

take education for granted,

then

they won't appreciate the learning opportunities they have. Take my friend, Tina,

for example

, her family compelled her

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higher education even though she spent time

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playing. She not only learned nothing from

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studies

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but

also

met bad friends who taught her how to smoke.

On the other hand

, my friend Tony, who had a

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job and went for

studies

at night. He cherished the chance of school life since he paid the tuition himself. From

such

examples, it demonstrates that children should know why they need to go to school and they should

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choices. Another reason for my belief is that kids may not all enjoy studying. They could be responsible for their own decisions after 16 years old.

For instance

, my cousin Mike, who went to study until

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university,

however

, he is a cook now. What he is doing now is nothing related to his

studies

even though he spent tons of time and money

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his schools.

Consequently

, it can be said that parents should know more about

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son or daughter's interests before

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force them to spend years on

studies

. To conclude, it is not to say that other points of

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are

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without merit.

Nevertheless

, the reasons I have presented could support the position that young

people

should not always be required to finish full-time

studies

until

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18 years old

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