Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Many
people
believe that every child should be educated until they finish senior high school degrees. Use synonyms
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first
reaction Linking Words
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some Change preposition
of
people
is to concur with Use synonyms
such
claims. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, from my point of view, there are several persuasive reasons to refute Linking Words
this
statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of perspectives to examine Linking Words
this
issue more Linking Words
in depth
.
The main reason to support my position is that if young Add a hyphen
in-depth
people
take education for granted, Use synonyms
then
they won't appreciate the learning opportunities they have. Take my friend, Tina, Linking Words
for example
, her family compelled her Linking Words
for
higher education even though she spent time Change preposition
to
on
playing. She not only learned nothing from Change preposition
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the
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her
studies
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,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
met bad friends who taught her how to smoke.
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On the other hand
, my friend Tony, who had a Linking Words
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part-time
part time
job and went for Add a hyphen
part-time
studies
at night. He cherished the chance of school life since he paid the tuition himself. From Use synonyms
such
examples, it demonstrates that children should know why they need to go to school and they should Linking Words
also
have Linking Words
the
choices. Another reason for my belief is that kids may not all enjoy studying. They could be responsible for their own decisions after 16 years old. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, my cousin Mike, who went to study until Linking Words
finished
university, Correct pronoun usage
he finished
however
, he is a cook now. What he is doing now is nothing related to his Linking Words
studies
even though he spent tons of time and money Use synonyms
for
his schools. Change preposition
on
Consequently
, it can be said that parents should know more about Linking Words
your
son or daughter's interests before Correct pronoun usage
their
you
force them to spend years on Correct pronoun usage
they
studies
.
To conclude, it is not to say that other points of Use synonyms
views
are Fix the agreement mistake
view
totally
without merit. Replace the adverb
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Nevertheless
, the reasons I have presented could support the position that young Linking Words
people
should not always be required to finish full-time Use synonyms
studies
until Use synonyms
18-year-old
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18 years old
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