It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many hold the view that learning basic science majors are less useable than social science ones.

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essay discusses both sides of

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argument, and why I would argue that math and the relevant subjects value more.

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with, there is no doubt that a systematic study of literature, drawing, sculptures and music can help students build up good taste when decorating homes.

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, artistic furniture and decorative paintings are purchased to express their owners’ uncommon

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, when chatting with friends, those who have studied art can

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various topics, in

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way, gaining more opportunities to interact with people surrounding them.

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is a good start to stepping into society.

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, there are multiple choices of jobs to choose from after graduation,

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as becoming teachers, administrative specialists, advertising planners or even freelancers.

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, math and related projects can practice the students’ logical thinking skills, improving their efficiency when at work and at college, to solve problems professionally and rapidly.

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, those young people who have done scientific research at universities can choose to become engineers as a career, for

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is a job which provides a relatively stable income.

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, calculating and logic are needed in the situation when the students live independently managing their own financial accounts. In conclusion, deep research of math and science is crucial not only in pursuing a career but

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in domestic life, which is fundamental to other knowledge and expertise,

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literature and art can broaden the learners’ view and help them achieve a better appreciation competence.

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task response

The essay provides a clear argument and discusses both sides of the topic effectively.

coherence and cohesion

The essay has a logical structure with clear introduction and conclusion. However, there can be improvements in connecting ideas throughout the body paragraphs for better cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

264 words

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