One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person.

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Dear Arif, Hope you are doing well, I am writing

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letter to suggest to you a relevant course which you can pursue in Australia. As you are aware that you have completed Hotel Management with good marks so I recommend you to take masters in cookery course which will be more helpful to strengthen your career. Moving

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particular program will help to build your skills and it is one of the most demanding courses in Australia. There are many 5-star hotels where you can find a job easily. There is intake starting in September month and course fees are

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a considerable not more than 10 lacs. For more discussion I want you to visit my home

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Sunday so we can have quality time to talk about the pros and cons of the subject and finalize the plan if you like it. A part from that will eat your favourite food in a restaurant which is nearby home. Hoping to see you on Sunday. Yours faithfully, Karan.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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