Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
says
that the Change the verb form
say
construction
Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
of
Use synonyms
railway
Correct article usage
the railway
system
should be invested more than roads by the government. I partially agree with Use synonyms
this
idea. With the truth that Linking Words
Use synonyms
railway
is on behalf of public Correct article usage
the railway
transportation
, the more public Use synonyms
transportation
was built the less pollution will be made by Use synonyms
traffic
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
road
Use synonyms
construction
Use synonyms
also
brings Linking Words
positive
side to the community.
On one hand, it is definitely a truth that the more public Add an article
a positive
transportation
is used by citizens, the less Use synonyms
of
air pollution, Change preposition
apply
traffic
Use synonyms
problem
, and carbon dioxide Fix the agreement mistake
problems
emission
would cause. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
Furthermore
, we can see that almost every government around the world encourages Linking Words
Add an article
the resident
resident
to make maximum use of train, subway or metro Fix the agreement mistake
residents
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system
in order to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
systems
traffic
Use synonyms
problem
during Fix the agreement mistake
problems
the
rush hour. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, the fuel consumption is going to be more effective when we take Linking Words
train
rather than Add an article
the train
a train
car
. The advantages Add an article
the car
a car
from
Change preposition
of
the
public Correct article usage
apply
transportation
are undoubtful.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
railway
Correct article usage
the railway
system
can only take care of some satellite cities around Use synonyms
urban
Add an article
the urban
an urban
area
, which means it is almost impossible to make an enormous investment Fix the agreement mistake
areas
on
Change preposition
in
countryside
to build Add an article
the countryside
such
heavy Linking Words
construction
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
road
Use synonyms
construction
in rural areas is served Use synonyms
same
value Correct article usage
the same
regarding to
the Change preposition
as
railway
. Use synonyms
Besides
, as we can see some severe weather events or Linking Words
earthquake
make the Fix the agreement mistake
earthquakes
railway
Use synonyms
system
totally unrepairable. In order to maintain the lifeline of citizens, investment Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
road
Use synonyms
construction
should Use synonyms
also
be needed.
To sum up, I believe Linking Words
Use synonyms
railway
Correct article usage
the railway
system
plays a vital role Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
in
urban
Add an article
an urban
the urban
area
, but Fix the agreement mistake
areas
road
Use synonyms
construction
should not be overlooked. It depends on areas Use synonyms
which
Change preposition
in which
traffic
solutions are more suitable.Use synonyms
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