Some people believe that parents have great influence on children's growth, but others think that influence from the outside plays a more important role. Discuss both test views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, There are those who consider that

parents

have an impact on the growth of their

children

. But others think the outside world plays a more important role.

This

essay discusses both sides of

this

argument, and

then

I will give my own perspective which is

parents

play a more important role in the growth of

children

.

Parents

can be models for their

children

. In the earlier time of childhood,

children

always learn things from their

parents

.

For example

,

Parents

are the

first

teacher of their

children

. They teach their kids how to talk and how to walk. without early teaching from the

parents

, some

children

learn to speak at a very late time.

In addition

,

parents

also

help their

children

in the emotional area. People do their work without support from their families, they will be frustrated and even fail at work.

For instance

, Bill gates had support from his

parents

in his early 20s and

then

he got great success.

However

, Outside the family might impact the

children

most. In the academic life of

children

, they might spend half of their lives in their early 20s. School bullying may change someone's personality.

For example

, some school shootings happened just because students learn these violent solutions from TV or video games.

In addition

, young people

also

learn good manners in school or the other place.

Hence

, the outside world will influence

children

. In conclusion, I believe both sides will influence the growth of

children

. On balance, it is my opinion that

parents

acting is more important in the early childhood of

children

.

Parents

should support their kids in their academic lives.