Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, While others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There are several
languages
which are in
risk of disappearing from the world due to lack of use by Change preposition
at
people
. Some people
argue that governments
should financially support to save
these Change the verb form
saving
languages
whereas others think that it is a waste of money
. I believe protecting dialects which are in danger is important, I disagree governments
should allocate money
for this
. This
essay will discuss both these viewpoints.
Firstly
, governments
should allocate funds to server
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serve
very
basic needs of society like food, medicine and education, and fuel. Correct article usage
the very
Further
if the economy is more stable, authorities can financially support Add a comma
,Further
to
improve peoples' wealth by improving public transportation, Fix the infinitive
apply
sport
facilities etc Change the noun form
sports
instead
of expending
them to save the Correct your spelling
expanding
languages
which are at risk of dying. Therefore
quality
of life will be improved while society and economy are more stable. Add an article
the quality
Moreover
young generation today is not encourage
to study local dialects. Because they see it as a Change the verb form
is not encouraged
waster
of their time since learning those Correct your spelling
waste
languages
are
not much Correct subject-verb agreement
is
useful
for their lives and career. For Replace the word
use
an
example, Correct article usage
apply
a
research that has been done using 10 000 university students has shown Correct article usage
apply
80
% of students are not using local Correct word choice
that 80
languages
for day to day
verbal communication. Add a hyphen
day-to-day
Thus
money
will be a waste if are not courage
to learn.
Add an article
the courage
On the other hand
, language is a prominent feature that can exhibit the value of a well established
culture to the world. Add a hyphen
well-established
Therefore
saving languages
which are in danger of disappearing is significant as it presents our heritage and proud history to globe
. Because of that financial allocations can be done by Add an article
the globe
governments
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up to
to
upto
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up to
certain
level to overcome Correct article usage
a certain
this
danger.
To conclude, even though high
cultural value is involved with Add an article
the high
languages
and they are at a
risk of dying, Remove the article
apply
governments
should mainly allocate their funds to make sure quality of lives
of Fix the agreement mistake
life
it's
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people
. Furthermore
, money
will be wasted when people
are not willing to speak those dialects.Submitted by sushaninim on
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