Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

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of society believes that learning

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at school is more crucial than learning

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, if children are not taught

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for everyone is equally important as ensuring the existence of

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I will give reasons and expand my opinion.

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of all,

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worldwide,

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it is important to study it for everyone from

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childhood. From

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benefits side, being able to speak

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opens an opportunity window to different career possibilities as

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person will be more valuable for an employer.

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picture,

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a world citizen. From the economical side, more people will be employed in international companies,

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the sales, marketing and communication procedures will operate quicker and smoother.

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can make a negative impact on

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’s extinction. If people stop nourishing their own

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it is possible to

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part of a culture.

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identity, which is an integral part of history. Children, as well as

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can be taught the importance and benefits of knowing their local

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. There are many ways of doing

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reading classical native books, watching local movies or travelling to rural areas where only native speakers live.

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, singing national songs and volunteering in local organizations which seek to

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the local

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can be a valuable

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, as well. To summarise, in my

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everyone should learn

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as it is the most popular spoken

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in the world and it gives a bunch of

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possibilities

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possibilities

for those who can communicate in

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language

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, it is crucial to not forget your roots and

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create

added value for local

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survival by being an active supporter of local organisations and a fan of native writers and creators

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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that the experience children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.