The advances in air travel are focused only in the first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all? Do you agree or dissgree?

Pushing updates on the aeroplanes that passengers can be experiences pleasure journey is the most priorities among companies ,

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,some people opine only gold situation and business

class

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the latest facilities and economic passengers have been

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,

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statement ,but ,I will discuss both

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to clarify it. In a beginning,Business and

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flight

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are completely different from economic level and

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on

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passenger's

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that they can afford

this

price, it is well known the best airlines are trying to use the new

thecnologies

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technologies

and convenient methods in

this

class

that their income can be improved ,so, in the short period ,

first

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class

will be changing more than economic

class

,but , in a long time , all structures in the aeroplane will progress ,so ,

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changes are gradually approaching.

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, many argue and allege

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budget must

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in all parts of flight and

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specific

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foundation is not

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right decision ,

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ideal but I am afraid it is not practical in real life ,because, the infrastructure of flights needs to huge wealth to improve suddenly ,in

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,many ordinary passengers would not prefer

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their money on the

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in air travel ,

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although

,

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is interested in

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journey ,but, it may be not

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urgent . To summarize ,

first

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flights are designed for people that enjoy

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new technologies,

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beds ,but, it is constructed

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on their pockets , and in a long time , better

equipments

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will replace

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all parts of aeroplanes,so , I

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whole heartedly

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agree with the most attention must be on the business

class

to produce wealth.