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In some countries tv programmes are transmitted throughout the day and night . Some people think that 24 hour transmission has positive impacts , while others believe it is negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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who does not want to connect with the world through media?
Television
programs
, nowadays , are broadcasted by producers for
whole
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 day. It is believed by a certain section of society that telecasting the
programs
 for 24 hours
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 some advantages
however
 others considered it
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have
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 disadvantages. Both views are easily comprehensible . I am going to discuss these two views and elaborate on them from my perspective in
upcoming
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 paragraphs . Undoubtedly, the predominant merit of tv
programs
 is,
individuals
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 can gain knowledge
what
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 is happening around the world. To
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, when а person
watch
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 the news or serials which
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the
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content regarding the social
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issues
issuess
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issues
 or global issues and
this
 content is telecasted repeatedly ,
then
 persons cannot miss the opportunity to imbibe knowledge regarding current affairs.
Consequently
, they can do their work on time or
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get adequate information to stay connected with others.
However
, broadcasting tv
programs
 put
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adverse
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 impact on
health
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 of people. Because masses spend a significant proportion of time watching
television
programs
 and they are reluctant to do physical activities ranging from Yoga to running .
Consequently
, individuals will become
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succumb
of
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 various health disorders
such
 as weak vision , obesity and many more.
for instance
, Had the individuals of India not spent their long hours watching
television
 , the percentage of obese people will never be inclined. To conclude, without a doubt and people watch the news and show on repeat which
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 broadcasted on various channels.
Although
 for acquiring information
television
 is a great source of acquiring knowledge ; we cannot neglect its detrimental impacts on an individual's health.
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