In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For many people around the world, the preferred method of transportation is high-speed

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. Commuters travelling to and from

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rely on safety and efficiency, while tourists appreciate the convenience and novelty that

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provide. Others believe that highways, buses and regular

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should be improved before new, high-speed lines are added. Safety is chief among concerns for those who travel to

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or school on a regular basis. If one drives a car, they have to concentrate on the

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not only to avoid accidents but

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to prevent other drivers from causing a problem on the

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. The high-speed

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allows the commuter to leave the driving to the professional controlling the train, allowing them to get some

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done while getting to

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safely.

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, people tend to move

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and

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away from city centres, where land and houses are more affordable. The high-speed

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allows these commuters to travel greater distances in a shorter amount of time. There is a flow-on effect here

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because if we can reduce the number of cars on the

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, we can

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cut down on traffic jams and

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delays.

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, high-speed

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are expensive, and some believe

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money could be spent on repairing motorways which are used by cars, buses and motorcycles. Another possibility would be to use

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money to build more regular commuter

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and buses to service the ever-expanding urban populations.

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, boats and ferries could benefit from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport. In the end, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should be spent on the type of transport which will have the most benefit to all citizens.

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, we need to take into account how much the environment is damaged by fossil fuels and pollution.

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, I believe in order to move forward, we need to embrace the idea of

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high-speed

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so that future generations can continue to live safely and efficiently.