Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.
Many rare
species
around the world are existing due to changes in globalization which is an effect of deforestation of human needs. Some environmental experts argue that they need to support wildlife
preserves which will help in ecosystem balance
. In the following essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of this
situation and it will be further
elaborated.
Change preposition
on.
Firstly
, to maintain ecosystem balance
it is essential to preserve wildlife
animals as they are part of the food chain cycle, hence
consuming one another will not be overpopulated with particular animals as the ecosystem is balanced. If not overpopulation can disturb the environment. Moreover
, by protecting them we can maintain natural balance
and building
Wrong verb form
build
wildlife
sanctuaries that generates
income for the government. Which can be used for human needs. Change the verb form
generate
For example
, profits can be spent on education and health services.
Secondly
, maintaining these endangered species
requires a lot of maintenance. A large area of space is required to construct a wildlife
reserve, their food and other requirements are different for each species
which will cost a lot of money to the government. Furthermore
, species
should not be enclosed, their natural abilities of survival will come to end and dangerous animals can come out of sanctuaries in human living areas which can be a threat to them. For example
, in India
a few Elephants came out of the reserve and damaged public property.
To conclude, building Add a comma
,India
wildlife
reserves saves the extinction of rare species
, and maintain
Correct subject-verb agreement
maintains
ecological
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the ecological
balance
on earth, but on the Correct your spelling
other hand
otherhand
, sustaining the costs are huge to the government and Correct your spelling
other hand
also
can be a threat to humans.Submitted by mummanenikaran on
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