Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Many rare

species

around the world are existing due to changes in globalization which is an effect of deforestation of human needs. Some environmental experts argue that they need to support

wildlife

preserves which will help in ecosystem

balance

. In the following essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of

this

situation and it will be

further

elaborated

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Firstly

, to maintain ecosystem

balance

it is essential to preserve

wildlife

animals as they are part of the food chain cycle,

hence

consuming one another will not be overpopulated with particular animals as the ecosystem is balanced. If not overpopulation can disturb the environment.

Moreover

, by protecting them we can maintain natural

balance

and

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wildlife

sanctuaries that

generates

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income for the government. Which can be used for human needs.

For example

, profits can be spent on education and health services.

Secondly

, maintaining these endangered

species

requires a lot of maintenance. A large area of space is required to construct a

wildlife

reserve, their food and other requirements are different for each

species

which will cost a lot of money to the government.

Furthermore

,

species

should not be enclosed, their natural abilities of survival will come to end and dangerous animals can come out of sanctuaries in human living areas which can be a threat to them.

For example

, in

India

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a few Elephants came out of the reserve and damaged public property. To conclude, building

wildlife

reserves saves the extinction of rare

species

, and

maintain

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ecological

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balance

on earth, but on the

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other hand

otherhand

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other hand

, sustaining the costs are huge to the government and

also

can be a threat to humans.