Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the
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years, it is more and more difficult for most people to answer the question about their own
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and almost nobody can remember the
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day when he had spent free
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on one of his
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.
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, I suggest,
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change influences all of us not only as individual people but
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as a
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, because I believe, that
hobbies
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play a huge role in the
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of each person.
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of all, we live in times of digitalisation and for being on-trend we have to spend the biggest part of our
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in virtual by creating our own virtual personalities for each other.
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makes the simplest reason for
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without
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: It is very difficult to find some free
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for doing the stuff we liked.
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,
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has already forgotten, how to spend at least one hour without smartphones and laptops doing something in the real world.
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, the
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experiment between me and my friends showed, that we can alife maximal 45 minutes a day without checking Instagram, Whatsapp or Facebook. As you can see, three-quarters of an hour is our longest free
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, which we can invest in something real. In the past, before the technik progress came, the
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of all people was 100 % real and it was perfectly normal, that they needed
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for their free
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now everybody has to choose by himself about spending
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on the things he likes, the whole
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now and in the future is affected by
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choice. With losing
hobbies
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as a part of our
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, we lose the opportunity to develop our own skills and personality, because actually, our
hobbies
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help a lot to build our character, our mindset and to collect all arts of knowledge. While now everybody knows what the word "hobby" means, we as the whole
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can start to invest our
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in
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for developing ourselves again. If it willn't happen soon, our children wouldn't be able to correct
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mistake of our generation. In conclusion, it is clear, that only together we are able to change
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drawback of digitalisation by spending
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on our
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. I am sure, that we have to do it not only for ourselves
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but
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for the development of our children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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