Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) do not directly improve the quality of people's life, so governments should spend money on other areas. Do you agree or disagree?

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had played an essential part in our spiritual life before transforming into a lucrative industry.

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, several opinions argue that because living quality can not be directly affected by

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, it is better for politicians to navigate finance's current into other fields.

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principle will bring immediate benefits

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situations, I partly disagree with it on account of the considerable profits provided by artistic manufacturers in the modern age.

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showed its best effectiveness during difficult periods. To draw an illustration, a temporary ban on unnecessary jobs including artists and musicians was declared in North and South Korea after their devastative civil war.

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effort was made to save the workforce to construct buildings for homeless Koreans.

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, it is obvious that to quickly recover the living quality of people during critical circumstances,

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investments should be minimized to give place for basic needs

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as food and housing. On the other side, the interests gathered together with additional employment in creative industries can lift up the standard of a civilian's life. A clear example

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witnessed in later North Korea's redirection in national precedence from fundamental aspects to the promising

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and entertainment area, whose product was able to take advantage of digital technology to spread globally and

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earned numerous amounts of money from both local and foreign markets. By holding a billion-dollars entertainment,

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nation had enough money to strengthen

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industry’s workforce by enhancing living and education conditions. In conclusion, even though the priority of art in financing can be varied depending on the status of a region, I believe the advantages our life received from

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field are more and more remarkable

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investing in

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will be the trend in the following decades.