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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

#country #language
Some
people
 believe that it will lead to serious social
problems
 including practical ones when someone lives in a country in which he must to speak
local
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the local
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 official
language
that is
 different to
you
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 mother tongue. I agree with
this
 opinion to some extent, since I am sure that it will cause certain social or practical
problems
 but will extremely unlikely cause a serious one.
To begin
 with, it seems to me that there are three main reasons that can contribute to some
problems
.
Firstly
, due to the imperfect
language
 skill, misunderstandings may emerge between native
person
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people
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 and
tourist
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tourists
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.
Secondly
, even if the tourist can speak as native
people
, the great gap of cultures is still impossible to entirely fill up.
This
 gap is another reason
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 those
problems
.
Finally
,
bad
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 man exists
every
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 corner of the world, and it is those
people
 that are good at utilising
language
problems
 to make conflicts. Indeed, those
people
 can trigger conflicts anywhere using any excuse.
Language
 does not matter actually in
this
 situation.
However
, I do not believe that
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serious
problems
 can happen easily whatever the situation is. Because I insist that most
of
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people
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 in the world are very
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 and they understand those cultural differences.
In addition
, those tourists are very modest
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abroad, so that they will not sharpen contradictions when they meet terrible things in general. And
finally
, those
problems
 which are caused by
language
 are easy to deal with after they understand what they expressed
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 each other. In conclusion, I insist that those serious
problems
 which are caused by
language
 will not happen in most cases.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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