You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Manager: I am writing
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permission to transfer to the
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our department for several years and have gained a lot
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the challenging
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that I handled.
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attracted me for a long time. The
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is that the
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can provide a more high sight on our business which may be useful for our department.
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who have
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similar experience and background as me. These two reasons both lead me to make the decision. During the time I am away, I sincerely ask
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arranging the fairs that were belonging to me. I have detailed the works currently in my hand in a
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document which can help others to
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in fast. Best Regards, Douglas
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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