Since the technology is cheaply accessible, parents find it convenient to engage their children with the same. What problem does it cause and what solution can you suggest?

There

have

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been

knowing

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that technological advancements are increasing significantly day by day so

many

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for many

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parents

this

development can cause adverse effects on their children.

Furthermore

, technological vehicles are more convenient and flexible

of

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them

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so most parents

thinking about

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this

case

have

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many negative sides and the young generation will be impacted negatively. I will examine both two sides in

this

essay.

To begin

with, one of the most

benefits

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is that technological development can be useful to vast people's

life

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.

Such

as people who want any information about something, can access it anywhere or anytime via the internet directly.

Especially the

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young generation

like

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likes

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spending their leisure time with laptops or telephones

because

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to

playing

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online games or

texting

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messages to friends.

In addition

, a teenager may desire to connect with their close friend via Facebook or Twitter so

this

case has various benefits for all of

youthful

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.

On the other hand

, many societies and governments believe that some technological vehicles or sites must be restricted to the young generation. Because they can be affected negatively

due to

imitating terrible characters in games.

Therefore

, many parents agree with

this

position

due to

numerous drawbacks that might impact their children's life expectations.

Also

, spending

much

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time on the internet

has been let

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some important diseases.

For example

, eyesight, heart disease

and

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physical issues etc.

To sum up

, in recent times,

however

many individuals should follow their children's activities on the

internet

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or in technological vehicles despite their complaints. I think that developing skills in

this

area can be used effectively in people's

life

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.