A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university comp science explain why you recommend the university best faculty and placement give some advice about how to apply online portal

Dear Ravi, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am glad to hear your's decision on computer science at UBC university.
Firstly
, it is three years course including six months of project work which would provide phenomenal knowledge at the end of the course.
Secondly
, there may be a monthly assessment to scale the knowledge levels of each individual. As you know, computer program-related degrees are having huge demand in the industry.
Furthermore
, The UBC is having mesmerizing faculties with profound experience in their field of studies.
On the other hand
, we have a substantial amount of job placements every year despite the academic marks. Having said that, these two points will be providing a massive advantage at the end of the study.
However
, I strongly believe that you should apply through an online portal and I am happy to help you if you require any help while filling out the online application.
Furthermore
, please do not forget the user ID and password which are crucial while making the payment for the rest of the years. Please do not hesitate to call me if you need any additional info about
this
program. Please keep me posted with the status and I look forward to hearing good news with admission confirmation. Hope you will get it soon. Best regards, Lakshmi.
Submitted by lakshma999 on

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