in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Childhood has long been considered

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a crucial time for inculcating some fundamental beliefs in

children

. It is customary in some nations that adults try to convince

children

any goals they set will not be attainable unless they work hard.

This

belief brings some positive effects. whilst, it can indeed lead to some grave consequences.

Initially

, it is undeniable that having a determined mindset is a primary requirement to become successful. Having been constantly told that success is the fruit of

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, a child begins to internalize

this

attitude which,

consequently

, results in acquiring some positive personality traits

such

as perseverance, determination, and persistence. These qualities, which directly contribute to success, make them try their best to fulfil any assigned tasks.

Moreover

, when youngsters, from an early age, are educated to be focused on their goals and pursue their dreams, they are more likely to thrive

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any

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they desire, which

finally

brings about a bright future for them.

However

, it is apparent that there are certain drawbacks to instilling

such

ideas into

children

. In general, parents with

such

mindsets, unintentionally tend to impose considerable pressure on youngers.

Therefore

, in order to live up to their

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expectations,

children

would suffer from anxiety, stress and anger.

In addition

, as

children

are highly impressionable, having

this

belief can lead to an illusion which makes them suppose they are fully capable of achieving what they dream of. So, when they are in critical circumstances or experience failure, they are very prone to mental health problems and in some cases severe depression or even suicide. To sum up, while emphasizing

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the importance of hard work may benefit

children

by building up some positive qualities and bringing success, there are a number of significant disadvantages which could be prevented by parents’ close attention to

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mental health state.