in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvanteges of giving children this massege?

children are born to learn and
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those kids that if they try harder they can
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, if we think about
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way that it has a great impact on the kids
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because if they try hard to
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their goals,
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, these kids
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to
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everything
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early age, they are very impatient . They do not want to wait and
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they face failure in the process of
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something they instantly give up. Reminding them to try harder give them
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boost up and push in resulting their success.
for example
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state from
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,
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of youngster wants to become IAS office to
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their goal in their
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they teach that in order to be
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IAS office they have to try harder.
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harden it give them stress., which
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them physical and mental health.
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birth to do hard work due to which many adults suffered heart attacks out of stress when they reached their early twenties.
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. In conclusion, while there are plus points in advising children to try hard enough to succeed in any task, concentration should be
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encouraging their abilities and
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them to function smartly.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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