Many teenagers believe becoming social media influencers is a good career choice. However, other insist that there are some major drawbacks related to an influencer career. Discuss both views.

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Career
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of a famous
influencer
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becomes more and more
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preferable
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in youth circles. Most of them
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about the
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beneficial
beneficiary
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choice, while others
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significant drawbacks
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this
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path.
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Influencer's
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An influencer's
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job could be much more profitable and self-entertaining than other career paths.
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, kind of job always involves development and
inventation
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invention
of different projects and products and distribution and
advetisement
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advertisement
of them amongst auditory, which is much more exciting work than boring and simple financial accountant's routine.
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, these projects and products could involve advertisements and collaborations with other companies or influencers.
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usually increases satisfaction with the work and increases the average income from products.
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, profits correlate with the popularity of a specific product,
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, depending on
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of views or clicks
wealthfare
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wealth fare
of
an
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an influencer boost
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influencer
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boosts immediately.
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,
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job involves a lot of risks than the
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standard
standart
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one.
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, there is a high probability of being
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an unsuccessful
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blogger than expected.
Vast
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majority of bloggers are unknown and unrecognised due to high
competitevnes
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competitiveness
on the social
media
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market, but many people do not expect themselves in
such
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role
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a role
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.
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, a high risk of
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loosing
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losing
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reputation could easily plummet profit and enjoyment. As
any
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highly competitive market, social
media
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does not like terrible
stries
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stories
and conflicts in its members' lives, which leads to no future possible profit and
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booking
bowling
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bullying
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media
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.
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, only a minority of bloggers
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advertisers, who
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more than the half of
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influencer's
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influencers'
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income, and there is a high risk of lack of a product to promote. In conclusion, there are many career paths and all of them
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major advantages and disadvantages, and the social
media
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influencer
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is not an exception.
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