Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Reading a newspaper on the internet is becoming more popular than ever before.
Although
a lot of
people
prefer finding information via the internet, some think the demand for newspapers cannot be replaced by anything else. In my perspective, I totally disagree with
this
statement because today,
people
are looking for the easiest and the fastest modes to gather information rather than sticking with old styles.
Although
there are modern sources to gather information, For a certain type of
people
, it is more like a habit. They feel it is more relaxed and peaceful ,
therefore
, they are reluctant to change their behaviour.
For example
, a survey shows that 90% of the elderly
people
in India still prefer to read the news in the papers. Because of that, they feel the demand for newspapers cannot be replaced by another.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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