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Band 3

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Learning a foreign
language
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 is required due to the whole world, it is undeniable that non-native
language
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 at the present time is very important for everyone in society. Every people think that most
children
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 should start foreign
language
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 at elementary school in the early years. From my point of view, I agree with
this
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 statement there be can a lot of benefits for offspring in their future life.
To begin
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 ,with some people disagree with
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 statement because
that is
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 not good for small
children
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. They think if teachers put pressure on
children
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 to learn a Foreign
language
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 so the
children
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 feel stressed and
also
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children
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 will fell into a depression.
for example
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, in the Times of India in 2018 the tutor pressured
the
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 child to learn the English
language
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 the child died of fear and that's why some parents refused to teach English to their
children
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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