A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

#friend #holiday #destination #place #-where #-what #food

Dear Anna, How have you been? I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and in

best

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of spirits.

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I am

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I am

writing

this

letter in response to your

last

letter regarding vacation planning.

Firstly

, I have

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suggestions for your trip. Indeed,

Munnar

will be a good option for your journey.

Munnar

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district

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. It is one of the popular holiday destinations in Kerala

moreover

it is a hill station and town.

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of months back my husband and I visited there. It was a nice trip for us.

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, in

Munnar

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have

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stayed in an enormous hotel named

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leela

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palace . It is a

five star

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hotel . The hotel is well known for their

rooom

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room

service

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they have different cuisines from different countries. I must say, the food was very delicious. We consumed dishes from Italian,Mexican and Arabic.

Munnar

is very famous for recreational activities

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flower garden and tea museum are

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. And I'm happy to advise you that don't miss it. The best thing for you is

Munnar

. Enjoy your vacation. I look forward to meeting you. Best regards, Krishnapriya.

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1Word repetition
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9 paragraphs

192 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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