A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

Dear Anna, How have you been? I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and in
best
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of spirits.
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writing
this
letter in response to your
last
letter regarding vacation planning.
Firstly
, I have
few
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suggestions for your trip. Indeed,
Munnar
will be a good option for your journey.
Munnar
is situates
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in
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. It is one of the popular holiday destinations in Kerala
moreover
it is a hill station and town.
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of months back my husband and I visited there. It was a nice trip for us.
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, in
Munnar
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we
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stayed in an enormous hotel named
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leela
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palace . It is a
five star
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hotel . The hotel is well known for their
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service
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they have different cuisines from different countries. I must say, the food was very delicious. We consumed dishes from Italian,Mexican and Arabic.
Munnar
is very famous for recreational activities
especially
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flower garden and tea museum are
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. And I'm happy to advise you that don't miss it. The best thing for you is
Munnar
. Enjoy your vacation. I look forward to meeting you. Best regards, Krishnapriya.
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