A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

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Dear Anna, How have you been? I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and in

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of spirits.

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letter in response to your

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letter regarding vacation planning.

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, I have

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suggestions for your trip. Indeed,

Munnar

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will be a good option for your journey.

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district

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. It is one of the popular holiday destinations in Kerala

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it is a hill station and town.

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of months back my husband and I visited there. It was a nice trip for us.

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stayed in an enormous hotel named

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leela

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palace . It is a

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hotel . The hotel is well known for their

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they have different cuisines from different countries. I must say, the food was very delicious. We consumed dishes from Italian,Mexican and Arabic.

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is very famous for recreational activities

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flower garden and tea museum are

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. And I'm happy to advise you that don't miss it. The best thing for you is

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. Enjoy your vacation. I look forward to meeting you. Best regards, Krishnapriya.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

192 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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