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Some people think that criminal behavior can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals
believes
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 that criminal acts
occurs
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as a result
 of hereditary purpose,whereas others opined that situations of life could be the reason.I think that hardships can force an individual to break laws. Most deliquescent children inherited
this
 act from their parents as the family history of an individual can suggest if a crime is linked to a person's lineage.
However
,
this
 has not been scientifically proven.A popular kidnapper named Evans once explained to the masses that
this
 was the business of his forefathers and he learned it from his parents. In recent times,most persons faced with hardship can be forced to commit
crime
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crimes
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 as they feel
this
 is their only means of survival.A widow who is unemployed and has 6 children to take care
off
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 giving the standard of living in recent times,will be forced to think of perpetuating evil
,
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if she feels there
is
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 no other means of income.She could venture into fraudulent acts, prostitution and stealing.
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Inconclusion
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,I believe that a person's lifestyle can change drastically in a negative way if faced with difficult situations thereby leading to criminal acts.
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