Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress. Do you agree or disagree?
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prosper
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prospering
nation
. Some individuals say that to become enrich
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enriched
government
should spend more Add an article
the government
money
in
studying Change preposition
on
science related
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science-related
subjects
than other subjects
like arts and commerce. However
, I think that authority
should invest currency in teaching other Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
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subjects as
subjects
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much as teaching Correct your spelling
subjects
science
subjects
.
To begin
with, teaching science
is very beneficial for a nation
because in Correct your spelling
today's
todays
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today's
world
all the invention which makes people’s life or a nation
faster is due to well-being
of modern Correct article usage
the well-being
science
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People
Peope
use Correct your spelling
People
science
all
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in all
the
walks of their life. All the important things that advent till now is just because of studying Correct article usage
apply
science
. So, when a people
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person
getting
knowledge about Wrong verb form
gets
science
that means he/she grasping information about the earth. If a person advent a
new things by studying Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
science
which can be possible is beneficial for the nation
where he/she lived as a result
this
country
can make progress by using this
invention. This
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led
make
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making
country
valuable towards
the other Change preposition
to
nation
of the world
. In USA
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the USA
for example
, they have a
great fame Remove the article
apply
about
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for
science
and technology. Because of this
, they become the headman of the world
. Therefore
, the more students studying in
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apply
science
in a country
, the higher possibility there will be to become progress.
On the other hand
, governments should also
invest capital in teaching other subjects
such
as arts and commerce cause a country
can not improve their status by only improving science
departments. How developed a country
depends
on how well Add a missing verb
is depends
their
all education sectorCorrect pronoun usage
its
.
Studying arts and commerce Add a missing verb
is.
subjects
can improve a person’s position as well as a nations
. Many countries produce famous Correct the article-noun agreement
nation
businessman
who gave their Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
country
a huge amount of VAT every year from their business and most of those people were not studied in science
, they were
studied in other Unnecessary verb
apply
subjects
. For instance
, Zakma- the founder of the most growing e-commerce site ‘Alibaba’- his
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in his
country
(china) earn
a plenteous amount of Correct subject-verb agreement
earns
money
from his e-commerce site. Due to his
reputation, china gets lots of investment from the Correct pronoun usage
its
world
. Hence
, spending money
on other subjects
can be being
a way of Unnecessary verb
apply
development
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developing
for
a Change preposition
apply
nation
.
In conclusion, without developing
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a developing
education
system, a Correct article usage
an education
nation
can not progress his
value Correct pronoun usage
its
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in front
in-front
of the Correct your spelling
in front
world
. For this
some people say, a country
should invest money
more in science
departments than other sectors. My opinion is to spend money
on both devision
equally.Correct your spelling
division
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