Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.

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different
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age
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is very common. Trying new places to
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and different
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types
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of
food
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is very common in some individuals. But some
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think that
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should be no
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in their routine.
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both
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plausible
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in the following paragraph.
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with, trying a different type of
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and visiting different places encourage individuals to explore their knowledge and taste. By visiting at different cities help
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to know about their
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and their foods. Cities
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pupils
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to enhance their skills in
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way and can able to get better jobs in their skills. By trying different
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we can get
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taste
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and can know how it feels. Many
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can understand not only history but
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their
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. To cite an example, in Canada many
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from different countries
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for exploring
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nature and their
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. Folk are
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interested to try their foods
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because they are very delicious.
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, some folk keep doing the things
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which they are familiar. Individuals of the age
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mid
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are thinking that work and
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must not be
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because they are used to it.
Pupils
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like aged only
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do not
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want any changes in their routine. Those
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donot
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do not
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like to travel to new places and
donot
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do not
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international fast
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.
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of
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to
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place they always
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want
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want
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to
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relegious
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religious
place and traditional
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only.
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, in Brazil, their
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didnot
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did not
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any countries or they only like their
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and
culture
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which they have. Because of
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mind
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thinking
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Brazil is far from their knowledge and technology. To conclude, in
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dominating era,
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is very important,
change
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in life,
food
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, and trying something new is very important, though that only folk can be knowledgeable and can settle wherever they want.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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